FOF- The Abyss Stares Back 18

heh...originally in the first panel Jack said something like “I can't let you give your body to Pitch”...heh...had to re-write it or it'd have taken a very different path .

Something more like Morianbloodmoon's  (which I absolutely love, though there's a minor typo in the description...where she calls me a perv...obviously a typo ).

On a “serious”note originally page 17-19(which is not done yet) were only two pages with a grand total of 18 panels so I thought to break them down into 3 pages of 6 panels each (6 seems to be the magic number when it comes to panels ) BUT now I'm afraid it feels like it's too “slow”...and I'd love to hear your opinion .

Anyway, I hope you enjoy this new page and super-bad-ass-Kozzy (I think he's very “Pitch-like” here! ) Thank you for reading!!

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