Ohhhh dear!! you are such and observant reader!!!
Yes you really did and yes his change of heart is a bit hard to believe under this light!
(then again MN and Jack didn't see him so... )
So glad you noticed though! (quite a few people asked me later how could he know...so..
the thing with hiding characters is that you don't want to make it obvious but it must still be "visible"
so that observant Readers can see it!!! )well done and thank you again for readin my story, you have no idea
how happy it makes me to know that!!!
aww thank you so much my friend!!! hahaha I had so many troubles with this scene (and the following page) with Pitch expressions..because...er..
hehe yes..mystery!! XD
hahahahha did you?!?!?!
hahahahaha oh dear...I understand you...I try not to have anyone around me when I read your comments...cause I just...look...er...
awww THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! I hope you continue to like it!!!!
ehhhhhhh well....the answer is in page 16 and 19 I guess....XD
It's a bit like playing "where's waldo", but...look closely at page 16...
Ok, I started to think that Pitch was being all sweet and sincere...then I saw that last panel. Oh, that scheming smile, it looks so diabolical! xD He is DEFINITLY up to something! But what!? And how is he going to react to being a daddy! Haha, I never knew that Jack could say bad words! x) But it actually kind of fits him...don't know why. x) Great, not I envision Jack as a big sailor mouth! xD I just hope he isn't teaching Jamie his language habits...Haha, I could only imagine...Jack is Jamie's role model!
(Looks off into distance)
Jamie's mom: Hurry, Jamie, you're going to be late for school!
Jamie: Coming, Mo-- (trips down stairs) *BEEEEEP* stairs! My *BEEEEP* shoelace tripped me! Now I'll be late for *BEEEEEP* school! *BEEEEEP* *BEEEEEP* *BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP*
Jamie: Jack Frost...
Haha...ok, potty mouth Jack is totally a thing now...I kind of want to draw it. x)
ohhhh doesn't he look in earnest?XD
hahahahaha well Jack is a teenager isn't he? I expect him
to have picked up quite a bit foul launguage...!XD
Tough now that I think about it it would have been funny to have
him use OLD FASHIONED foul language(like, from his time)!!XD
hahahahahaha oh my!!XD Jamie won't ever be the same in my imagination anymore!
Oh yesterday I just remembered we had a thing going dear (a dancing thing )
must get to that as soon as I have the time!!!
Oh dear how I missed your comments!!!They always make me laugh and
I...kind of..imagine them like a Scrubs JD moment!!XD
Love ya hun! Hope to "see you" soon!!
Haha, true, true!
Oh my gosh, YEEEES. x) Ok, now THAT is what I have to draw. x)I'll try, but I'm not very good at drawing things spontaneously! I need more talent! x)
Oh gosh, I have to start the dancing thing too! Like I said, I.need.more.talent! LOL! x)
Lol, I've never seen Scrubs, but I just may just to see what you're talking about. x)
Right back at ya, my friend!
pfffft "need more talent" ....right! You humble being!!!XD Nobody would be drawing anything here if we waited to have enough talent I guess!!!XD
(and honestly, your ideas are so good that it would be funny even if you only drew it with "stickmen"...!Hell reading them is enough to make me burst!!....not that this will let you off the hook...THOU SHALL DRAW THEM!! XD )
hahaha No way!!haven't you??Oh I think it's great in its own sort of silly way...Like the first time you see it you'll think it's really stupid, but then you get into that sort of humor, slightly nonsensical...well I did at least...don't judge me because of that!!!XD
Anyway you made me think of that because the protagonist, JD,always has this sort of daydreams, like something happens that triggers them in his mind and off he is with his imagination... (like www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ni0ZAm…) Oh hell, I just spent 30 minutes watching scrubs videos. Must.Stop.That!!!XD
See ya soon my dear!!!
JD I FOUND YOUUUUu!!!!!!XD
(Really, I can hardly believe this message was written by any one but JD!!XD)hahahahha oh god you Always crack me up!!XD
Oh that's no flattery, just the truth my dear!!XD ohhhhh I can't wait to see it!!!!
ps still laughing here...!XD
DRAGAAAAA!!!! *rincorsa*----------> SUPER
I MISS YOU!!!!;__;
hahahahahaha you're probably the only one here (well...plus me!XD)
ohh you know the TADAAN thing makes me think of our first comments...!
(waaaaay back to page...bho? four?) when our love story was just beginning
but love was in the air already! XD
hahahahhaha yeah...we've seen what a gentleman he is....!especially when drunk!!XD
yeah...MN ...really???XD But look at them!!I hadn't really planned
for anything to happen between them, but I'll be damned if they're not flirting there!
ahhhh teenagers .....(well OLD teenagers...but still!XD)
hahahahah draga you don't really want me spoiler you, do you?
and anyway you're too smart for me...I can't fool you as a reader...
you've already noticed so many things.... ok...stop.I.need.to.stop.
or I'll just tell you!!
(ahhh you've no idea how many times I just want to go to you and tell you
about the story and ask you for advice...!but then I think I want to give a good
story and...somehow that gives me so much motivation....WERID.You see you
help me even without doing anything!!! )
hahahahhahaha THANK YOU SO MUCH MY DEAR!!!!!!!!
(how do you...?)dialogues are what I was most worried about in these pages
and of course my draga comes and flatters me like there's no tomorrow..!!!!
What would this comic be without you?What would I be without you?????
hahahaha from what I've seen so far it will be just a monster!!
(not being modest here ...but it looks pretty ugly... but
I starting to lose my patience here....so...I probably...will..upload it...anyway...
(woah...it's even hard to say it....!XD)
and I've seen there are goodies for me!
*wears swim suit*
PS THANK YOU SO MUCH MY BELOVED!!I'M SO SORRY I'M SO BEHIND IN ANSWERING!!!!
BUT YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND!!! :singing:
hahaha XD thou darest poke the Nightmare King?? Oh ye brave and foolish one!!
Ohhh ye have no faith in him...do you? XD
We'll see what he has in mind....!
hahahahha! You find him hot here? XD hahaha you're bad!! (I'm with you, though!)
agh! doh! well...you know the major twist is that in the next page they decide to drink to
celebrate Pitch's decision to accept the memories and they all get wasted....THE END! XD ( that you didn't see coming I hope?? XD)
ohh thank you so much for the info!! I'll go and have a look!! Though ever since I wrote that my tablet has started behaving better (must be afraid of being replaced...this thing has truly become a sentient being!!XD) In any case I'll start saving money...!XD
Thank you so much dear!!!