And I apologize, this one isn't really easy on the eyes and it's also incredibly messy...
(next time I say I'm going to do a 10 panels page just shoot me please!It'd spare you and me a lot of troubles..!XD)
Anyway I was hoping to finally see Pitch's memories but if Jack doesn't shut it...!
And my...is Pitch hypnotising MN???o_O XD
I'd like to know what you think is going on..like..is Jack right?or is Pitch in earnest?Should MN trust him?XD
Bhom, that's it, the next one is only like 5 panel, which sound like heaven right now..so maybe it won't take as long XD
Thank you for reading and commenting guys, you know how incredibly happy you make me!
Ps this one is dedicated to Alberto, who's the only person in RL who's always sustained me in this comic, listening for hours on end to me rambling
on dialogues, panels, storyboard, why even colors, even though the poor thing is colorblind! Thank you!
Also, "Don't be such a racist, Frost" had me laughing for solid ten minutes.
Haha! In the 6th panel Pitch looks like a 12-year-old girl about to say "Shut it!" And, actually, he looks fabulous in every panel!
hehehe so glad you liked it!!!!
(and super glad you read my comic!!! thank you!!)
and of course you got it right!! (gosh I'm actually really glad you didn't comment before the new page was up or you'd ruin my cliffy! )
ahhh my friend...you really got everythig!!! (even MN's thing...just.. )
haha who? Jack or Pitch?XD
Thank you dear!! I hope you'll like the rest!!
ahhh my dear....!
Thank you SO much!! You're truly too kind to me!!!!
Lol, as soon as Jack said, "and You're Black?!?!, I just started laughing wondering if the pun was intended...Then Pitch said exactly what I was thinking and I just started laughing more. xD I also love Jack's little temper tantrum in the background and how he's practically being completely ignored. x) I also love Pitch's face in the second to last panel, it's like, "Trust me...OR ELSSSSEEEEEE ". What will MN do? WHATTTT?! Oh, suspense, we meet again...x)By the way, if Pitch gets his memories back and remembers that he's MN's father...can he ground MN for being a sassy mouth to him? Where would he ground her, does she even have a room?
hahahaha that was a silly pun but I just couldn't resist... (I've the sense of humor of a second grader...!XD)
hahahahahhahahaha oh gosh imagine that....!
Pitch: *remembers* You...You are my daughter...
Pitch: YOU ARE GROUNDED YOUNG LADY!!!
hahahaha I can't wait either...I really hope it does happen, but Jack is really being annoying here...I think when I write Jack's dialogue I'm inspired by my Brother....who can be the most annoying thing when he wants to...!XD
(ahhhh evil twin....they're an endless source of inspiration...!XD)
Oh, have you ever drawn any? (if so I'd like to see them...! )
hahaha I guess what I dislike the most of this page is that it is graphically insignificant...I usually have something interesting/challenging graphically-wise in every page, but here... just dialogue and dialogue and some more dialogue...
ohhhh my dear...that's exactly what I was going for...!!!!
ahhh THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!
hahahahahha ditto!!! make.him.shut.up!!
ohhh I'm glad you are!! it shouldn't be too long I hope!! (I've been waiting for that page forever...!!XD)
hahahaha HE IS!! (I guess he takes after me...XD)
oh my dear I've been missing youuuu!
How have you been?
Kind of a messed up way to start but it was the last ting I noticed, it's that the dawn approaching? (I mean in the comic (oh, my bad sense of humor is back )) *goes scrolls trough all the pages* Hmmm. It doesn't seem soooo, ah, I see. The last two panels have a very scarce vegetation ''a differenza'' from all the others so it seems like it's getting lighter and day is approaching, anyway what I wanted to say is that it created a really great atmosphere of suspense for me!! I get the feeling like the next page is the beginning of a new chapter! Especially wit the last panel without dialogue (I can hear the suspense soundtrack )
Soooo exluding my strange crazy rant (I swear I'm sober ) about downs and so, oh, where to start from???
I also thought and wished to see the memories but this is far better! Only now do I realize how incomplete it would be if he simply ''got'' his memories. So, again, brilliant dialogues as usual, you really went to the depths of each character making the comic even more intense and intriguing!! Actually, people usually prefer the ''dynamic'' parts of the comic (which ends in shallow characters and stories (of course it depends from what the target is (fun or storytelling or...) (I'm talking like I'm an expert here It's just my humble opinion))) to the ''dialogues'' but yours are both just so intense and dynamic!!
Hmmm my opinion? Firstly I don't think Pitch is hypnotizing MN I feel more like she is recalling something she alone can't explain ( that explains the O.O look on her face ). SecondlyJaaaaack shut iiiiit! You had your movie, you can't have the comic to, go pay a visit to your fangirls won't you? Don't try to act all heroic and wise.
I think, cross that, I KNOW Pitch has a plan BUT, buuut, I can't still figure out if he'll unleash his power violently (so Jack is right) OR, or he'll do it silently and furtively... I choose the second option, why? I think the memories will shock him too much to ''burst'' immediately And he is an intelligent bastard he wouldn't go without a sly plan, would he? But he is definitely going to try to destroy or at least diminish the power of the guardians. I mean, I hope, he won't turn from a villain to a hero like Gru from ''Despicable me'', right? RIGHT? Don't tell me!!!
I just wont go trough all the ''I will kick your ass'' story for underestimating your skills... You know it by heart by now I just can't see what is it that you don't like ? Boh?
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA oh my, poor guy, I can imagine what is he going trough!! WIth you beeing so ambitious and always lacking satisfaction I bet it's almost a torture! Hhahahahahah I'm kidding, I know you wish only the best and if it was a torture he wold run away sooo, tell him he is doing an excellent job as the ''comic consultant'' and say ''Hy'' to him
Khm... This got longer-ish eh? I'm sorry for the torture
I can't help myself, it's too awesome and all the thoughts and emotions keep flowing once I start replying!!! I LOVE IT TOO MUCH!!
Ok I have to go now or else I'm dead!!