I should be studying!! ok..anyway, I couldn't sleep so I made this one, BUT I was very indecisive about the last panel..I wanted it to have a strong feeling so there are 4 possible options..and I would like to ask for your opinion which one do you think is better?
My dear friend reminded me that usually the first ideas are the best...and I originally wanted it to be in negative, but it turns out it in this case it means a white/pink panel for Pitch (and as much as I think pink suits him, I'm not too happy with it!) so...erm..what do you think? Here're the links to the other options!
Negative : frogsfortea.deviantart.com/art…
Black and White negative : frogsfortea.deviantart.com/art…
Black and White : frogsfortea.deviantart.com/art…
As for the story, I hope you like it (if you want a sneak peek of the interlude the 4th panel contains dialogues from it! ) and since we're getting to the “fun” part I won't be blabbering as usual in the next few pages XD (my big mouth is dangerous to my own cliffhangers!!)
ah thank you for the feedback! ( I like the black and whites too!XD)
awww THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
so glad you like it!!!!!!!!
black and White negative...roger that!! (I'm quite fond of it myself!! )
thank you so much for your feedback!!<3
hahahaXD Pink will be the best, no doubt about it!!XD In general though, I love how you showed what Pitch was seeing and what Jack and MN are seeing, and Pitch's expressions are perfect!! (I wonder what the words he's hearing are exactly, I can only make out snippetsXP) Please hurry and make more!!! That is all
ahh well I'll admit I'm feeling sorry for him too...!
what he's going through is...!
aww but at least she's not eenjoying it too much...! I'm glad Jack is reminding her how badass she wanted to be before with her "relishing this and that on poor Pitchy's face"
...(not too "poor" but still! XD)
hahahahah pink pitch forever!!! NOPE! I guess I'll keep it for when he's drunk!!
ah thank you I'm so glad you liked it!!!! (and that I didn't give too much away...I'm such a damn chatterbox...you know what?
next page I'm shutting up!not a word! nada! niett!!....god it will be tough!!! XD )
thy wish is my command!
awww shucks!!! thank you so much my dear!!! I'm so glad you like it!!
hehe er....getting to the "fun" part now...!XD
hahaha how coul I forget?!?!?! I joined the dark side because of it!!!XD
ah...!really MN!! I was counting on a Whole comic with him....you can't just
go and break my main charachter...that's just rude!!
awww thank you dear!!!
we're FINALLY getting to the thick of it!!
hahaha thank you sweetie!!
and may I tell you your popcorn eating smiley gave me the inspiration
for a strip?
Poor Pitch, having to relive memories that he sends him into a world of confusion. I do hope everything will in restore soon!!! Wonderful job, dearie! Keep it up!!!
hahah I can't blame her for not doing that...! he's ...er...throwing a tantrum alright, here? XD
ahhh you'll see what he's seeing...
thank you so much!!!!!
hahah true...(though I was lucky enough to sneak a peek at his memories )
I really agree wih your take on him! Being a soldier is a nasy business and he probably
has a couple of memories he's rather not remember...!
I was just making fun of dear Pitchy here..but ..yep...probably that was tactless of me!!XD